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gwendoline59

gwendoline59 (18)

gwendoline59
I speak:
French
I learn:
English, Spanish, Italian, Russian
Busuu berries :
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Hi friends :-) I have already done the exercise of Busuu :p
I have an exercise for the school, can you correct me the mistakes, please?
" My name is Gwendoline. I'm going to speak about the motion: Students should be rewarded with money when they get very good results. First of all, students who work hard deserve an award. In fact, they pass their time on the homework instead of play. No matter how hard they worked, students will have better marks, so it can improve the level of the school. Moreover, with their good marks, they will be able to enter in all universities. Despite their lack of brave, they will try to do more efforts and for consequently they will have to work hard and there will be less delinquance. Enven if they have bad marks, they will persevere to have the money. Indeed, students need money because we are in a society of consommation. Finally, in my opinion, it's a good idea because students are motivated to have good marks. "
Thanks in advance and see you soon ! ;-) Gwendoline

SJ Romo

SJ Romo (27)

SJ Romo
I speak:
English, Spanish
I learn:
German
Busuu berries :
776

Hi friends :-) I have already done the exercise of Busuu :p I have an exercise for the school, can you correct me the mistakes, please? " My name is Gwendoline. I'm going to speak about the motion: Students should be rewarded with money when they get very good results. First of all, students who work hard deserve an award. In fact, they pass their time on the homework spend their time doing homework instead of playing. No matter how hard they worked, students will have better marks grades, so it can improve the level of the school can be improved. Moreover, with their good marks grades, they will be able to enter in all universities. Despite their lack of brave, they will try to do more efforts and for consequently they will have to work hard and there will be less delinquance. Enven if they have bad marks grades, they will persevere to have the money. Indeed, students need money because we are in a society of consommation consumer goods society. Finally, in my opinion, it's a good idea because students are motivated to have good marks grades. " Thanks in advance and see you soon ! ;-) Gwendoline

conradveidt

conradveidt

conradveidt
I speak:
English, Spanish
I learn:
German
Busuu berries :
21158

good!