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gwendoline59

gwendoline59 (18)

gwendoline59
I speak:
French
I learn:
English, Spanish, Italian, Russian
Busuu berries :
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Hi friends :-) I have already done the exercise of Busuu :p
I have an exercise for the school, can you correct me the mistakes, please?
" My name is Gwendoline. I'm going to speak about the motion: Students should be rewarded with money when they get very good results. First of all, students who work hard deserve an award. In fact, they pass their time on the homework instead of play. No matter how hard they worked, students will have better marks, so it can improve the level of the school. Moreover, with their good marks, they will be able to enter in all universities. Despite their lack of brave, they will try to do more efforts and for consequently they will have to work hard and there will be less delinquance. Enven if they have bad marks, they will persevere to have the money. Indeed, students need money because we are in a society of consommation. Finally, in my opinion, it's a good idea because students are motivated to have good marks. "
Thanks in advance and see you soon ! ;-) Gwendoline

IgnaCas

IgnaCas

IgnaCas
I speak:
English, Spanish
I learn:
English, German, Portuguese
Busuu berries :
11541

Hi friends :-) I have already done the exercise of Busuu :p I have an exercise for the school, can you correct me the mistakes, please? " My name is Gwendoline. I'm going to speak about the motion: Students should be rewarded with money when they get very good results. First of all, students who work hard deserve an award. In fact, they pass their time on the homework instead of play. No matter how hard they worked, students will have better marks, so it can improve the level of the school. Moreover, with their good marks, they can be able to enter in all universities. Despite their lack of brave, they will try to do more efforts and for consequently they will have to work hard and there will be less delinquency. Enven if they have bad marks, they will persevere to earn money. Indeed, students need money because we are in a consumer society. Finally, in my opinion, it's a good idea because students are motivated to have good marks. " Thanks in advance and see you soon ! ;-) Gwendoline

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slainthe

slainthe

slainthe
I speak:
English, French
I learn:
Italian
Busuu berries :
14333

Hi friends :-) I have already done the exercise on Busuu :p I have an exercise for the school. Can you correct the mistakes for me, please? " My name is Gwendoline. I'm going to speak about the motion: Students should be rewarded with money when they get very good results. First of all, students who work hard deserve an award. In fact, they spend their time on homework instead of play.If they worked hard,students would have better marks, so it would improve the level of the school. Moreover, with their good marks, they would be able to enter any university. Despite their lack of brave, they will make more of an effort  and as a  consequence of their hard work, there will be less delinquency. Even if they have bad marks, they will persevere in order to have the money. Indeed, students need money because we are in a society of consommation. Finally, in my opinion, it's a good idea because it makes students motivated to have good marks. " Thanks in advance and see you soon ! ;-) Gwendoline   Bonjour, Gwendoline. J'espère que ceci t'aide.  Je n'ai pas trop bien compris ce que tu voulais dire avec brave.Si tu m'explique, j'essaierai de trouver l bon mot.