Having breakfast

Do you know that breakfast is the most important meal of the day? What do you usually have for breakfast?


Valentaval

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American David Whipple, who lives in Utah, accidently found the burger which he bought in McDonald's in 1999 and forgot about it in the pocket of his coat. Increadible, however, after 14 years everyone's favorite sandwich remained as if it has just been made. All those years sendwich was wrapped in its original package (Have been wrapped?). It wasn't touched by fungi or mold (haven't been touched?) and had no foreign smell (Can I say "foreign in this case?). The only thing that happened (have happened?) during that time - seasoning dried out.

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American David Whipple, who lives in Utah, accidently found the burger which he bought in McDonald's in 1999 and forgot about it in the pocket of his coat. Increadible, however, after 14 years everyone's favourite sandwich remained as if it had just been made. All those years the sandwich was wrapped in its original package. It wasn't touched by fungi or mold and had no unusual smell. The only thing that happened during that time - the seasoning dried out.

Excellent

sajoe

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American David Whipple, who lives in Utah, accidently found the burger which he bought in McDonald's in 1999 and forgot about it in the pocket of his coat. Increadible, however, after 14 years everyone's favorite sandwich remained as if it has just been made. All those years the sandwich was wrapped in its original package (Have been wrapped?). It wasn't touched by fungi or mold (haven't been touched?) and had no foreign smell (Can I say "foreign in this case?). The only thing that happened (have happened?) during that time - seasoning dried out.

Was wrapped is fine if you use it throughout. The alternative would be "had been wrapped" and "hadn't been touched" and you have already said "as if it had just been made" so had would be better, but that is being really picky. Equally "happened is fine" or you could say "had happened", 

Foreign is fine but better is "unusual "or "unpleasant"

"Favorite" and "mold" is American spelling instead of "favourite" and "mould" not wrong and easily understood.

Excellent writing well done but you have not answered the question perhaps you don't have breakfast in the Ukraine. :-)

Valentaval

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Thank you for corrections))) I just don't want to bore out to death people with telling what I eat on breakfast. I try to write something more interesting and to use more complicated grammer and vocabulary. Have a nice day. Is it wine or beer on your photo? )

sajoe

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I admire your aspiration to do more and better,but sometimes a little about yourself is not only interesting but can increase self awareness.

In my photo I am drinking beer whilst on holiday in Bruges, Belgium. There they seem to only serve in large measures.

I hope you enjoy your weekend, in England we have the May Day holiday on Monday instead of May 1st and the weather seems fine after a long winter so we plan to have a picnic. 

Regards sajoe