Episode 6 - Race against time

What chores do you do in your house?


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Actually I have to do all chores in my house because I live alone. I always tired from work and I haven't hired part-time helper, so my house is very mess. I just vacuum the floor and wash the dishes everyday. I mop the floor, dust and wash the clothes once a week on the weekend.

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Actually I have to do all chores in my house because I live alone. I always tired from work and I haven't hired part-time helper, so my house is very mess. I just vacuum the floor and wash the dishes everyday. I mop the floor, dust and wash the clothes once a week on the weekend.

I   AM   always tired..............so my house is very MESSY.        (  Very good  )

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Actually I have to do all chores in my house because I live alone. I always tired from work and I haven't hired part-time helper, so my house is very mess. I just vacuum the floor and wash the dishes everyday. I mop the floor, dust and wash the clothes once a week on the weekend.

 

Really very good.  Some small corrections:-

I am always tired from work and since I haven't hired a part time helper, my house is very messy (or really a mess)

I mop the floor, dust, and do laundry once a week on the weekend. (if you miss the comma after dust, then it sounds like you dust your clothes before you wash them)

 

 

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Thanks for your great comment! 

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"Actually I have to do all chores in my house because I live alone. I always tired from work and I haven't hired part-time helper, so my house is very mess. I just vacuum the floor and wash the dishes everyday. I mop the floor, dust and wash the clothes once a week on the weekend."

Great spelling!  A few tiny grammatical errors but it's perfectly clear what you mean.

Though I would write it like this:

Actually, I have to do all the chores in the house because I live alone.  I'm always tired from work and I haven't hired a part-time helper, so my house is very messy.   I vacuum the floor and wash the dishes every day.  I mop the floor, dust and wash the clothes every weekend.

Hope this helps.

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Yes, you are very helpful to me, thank you!