On the beach

You are going to the beach. What items will you take with you?


SiElenka

SiElenka (27)

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If I want to go on a beach I will take bikini, flip-flops, towel to wipe yourself after swimming; drinking water would be replenish the water reserves of the organism; sunscreen that would not burn on the sun; sunglasses to protect eyes from the sun. I will take with me good mood and your family and close friend. it things the most important items when you go to the beach.

If I want to go on/to a beach I take a bikini, flip-flops, a towel to wipe myself after swimming; drinking water would be replenish the water reserves of the organism; sunscreen that would not burn on the sun; sunglasses to protect eyes from the sun. I will take with me good mood and your family and close friend. it things the most important items when you go to the beach.

If I want to go to a beach I take a bikini, flip-flops; a towel to wipe/dry myself after swimming; drinking water to rehydrate myself; sunscreen prevent my skin from burning; sunglasses to protect my eyes from the sun.  I take my family and a close friend and I'm always in a good mood when I go there.  I think that these are the most important items to take.

I have altered your work, and I hope that I haven't lost the meaning.

 

SiElenka

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thank you for correcting

Brian R

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I agree with corrections made but.... sunscreen to prevent...

SiElenka

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thank you my dear friend

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If I want to go on a beach I will take bikini, flip-flops, towel to wipe yourself after swimming; drinking water would be replenish the water reserves of the organism; sunscreen that would not burn on the sun; sunglasses to protect eyes from the sun. I will take with me good mood and your family and close friend. it things the most important items when you go to the beach.

Very good.

Try this:- If I want to go to the beach I will take my bikini, flip flops, and a towel to dry myself after swimming.I would also take some drinking water not to become dehydrated. I would apply some sun screen to my body in order to prevent sun burn. I would have a good pair of sun glasses to protect my eyes. I would also like to take members of my family and possibly a close friend. These are the most important items to bring when going to the beach. 

SkaterSammo

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If I want to go to the beach I will take my bikini, flip-flops, and a towel to dry myself after swimming. I would also take drinking water so that I don't become dehydrated; sunscreen to prevent sunburn and sunglasses to protect my eyes from the sun. I would also take family members and close friends, as well as a good mood - these things are the most important items when you go to the beach!

Well done. Most changes are just to make it sound more natural.