My life in a form

What details appear on your country's identity card or passport?


jennyboissin

jennyboissin (60)

jennyboissin
I speak:
French
I learn:
English, Spanish, German
Busuu berries :
757

there on my identity card: The identity card number.
My name and surname .
My date of birth, my place of birth .
My nationality .
My sex .
My marital status .
My address with the avenue, or road and my city
My country

Dee333

Dee333 (62)

Dee333
I speak:
English
I learn:
Italian, Japanese
Busuu berries :
1448

there on my identity card: ~~~~~~~~    On my identity card you will find

The identity card number. ~~~~~~~~  ( good no change)

My name and surname .  ~~~~~~~~    my first name and surname..........or ....... my name

My date of birth, my place of birth ~~~~my date and place of birth

My nationality ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~( good no change)

My sex . ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(good no change)

My marital status~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(good no change) 

My address with the avenue, or road and my city ~~~~My home address in full

 and My country~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(good no change)

Rachael02

Rachael02 (50)

Rachael02
I speak:
English, Greek
I learn:
French, Russian
Busuu berries :
912

Everything is spelled correctly and is correct, except maybe the first part.  Better would be:

"On my identity card there are: the identity card number, my name and surname, my date of birth, my place of birth, my nationality, my sex, my marital status, my address with the street and city, and my country."

Remember to start sentences with a capital letter and to end them with full stops.  If you are making  a list and you use full stops with some of the entries, you should use them with all.

jennyboissin

jennyboissin (60)

jennyboissin
I speak:
French
I learn:
English, Spanish, German
Busuu berries :
757

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