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Welcome to the Hippo Spa

At this full-service "hippo spa," a swarm of hungry cleaner fish cleanses a hippo of dead skin, parasites, and even dung.
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This animal is just happy at that moment! I envy to it a bit. I'd like to be at its place now. It's a good massage for skin, I think. But at the fishes place i guess it's nasty, to eat even the dung..he he.. And in my opinion, the hippopotamus skin looks so unpleasant and disgusting.

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This animal is just happy at that moment! I envy to it a bit. I'd like to be at in its place now. It's a good massage for the skin, I think. But at in the fishes place water tank (?) I guess it's nasty, the fish to even eat  the dung...he he.. And In my opinion, the hippopotamus' skin looks so unpleasant and disgusting.

Well done! Only minor adjustments..

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Thaaank you! :-)

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This animal is just happy at that moment! I envy to  it  a bit. I'd like to be in its place now. It's a good massage for the skin, I think. But in the fish place I guess it's nasty, to eat even the dung..he he.. And In my opinion, the hippopotamus skin looks so unpleasant and disgusting.                                            Отлчно. Поэдравляю!

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Спасибо!

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It is incorrect to say "I envy to (...)". The correct way is "I envy it" or "I envy the hypo", "I envy him", "I envy her", etc. 

 

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 Yes, I envy (to )someone. I understood. Thank you very much. I memorised it :-)

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This animal is just happy at that moment! I envy to it a bit. I'd like to be at its place now. It's a good massage for skin, I think. But at the fishes place i guess it's nasty, to eat even the dung..he he.. And in my opinion, the hippopotamus skin looks so unpleasant and disgusting.

The Hippo seemed to be very happy and enjoying it's fish spa beauty treatment! I envy the Hippo a bit, as I would like to be in its place right now. It is a good skin massage for the Hippo.

However, I don't think its a very pleasant experience for the fishes; especialy when they are eating the Hippo's dung! In my opinion I think the Hippopotamuses skin looks so unpleasant and disgusting, regardless of this fish spa treatment.

Please do not use the words 'AND' or 'BUT' at the beginning of a sentence.

Good try so well done.

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Thanks a lot for help!

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You are welcome. Keep up the good work.