Negative feelings

Write about a time when you had a bad feeling. What happened? How did you feel?


marchitiello.

marchitiello. (28)

marchitiello.
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When I went to London the first time it is the first travel to me and I was alone. I was threatened because I couldn't one word of english and I didn't understand people around me. The early days I was pessimistic and puzzled and I felt abandoned but after some weeks the situation changed. Now I am always anxious when I have to start to a new journey.

When I went to London for the first time, it is the first travel to me and I was alone it was the first time i travelled alone. I was threatened because I couldn't speak even one word of english and I didn't understand the people around me. During the early days, I was pessimistic and puzzled and I felt abandoned. But after some weeks passed by and the situation changed. Now, I am always anxious when I have to start to a new journey.

well done!!! just tweaked a few grammars on your sentences. that was really good. you have to make sure that you put punctuation marks in the right places. otherwise, the people who will read this will run out of air in their lungs!! =) keep going. you're getting there 

lyndastuff

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lyndastuff
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When I went to London the first time it is the first travel to me and I was alone. The first time I traveled anywhere, I went to London and I was alone.

I was threatened nervous/ill at ease because I couldn't  speak one word of English and I didn't understand people around me. At first, I was pessimistic and puzzled and I felt abandoned, but after some weeks the situation changed. Now I am always anxious when I have to begin a new journey.

molto bene!