Describe the last concert you went to.
Recently I went to the a concert on the Twins' tour. It was very crowded in the audience, but it was still very exciting. the audiences are very crowed and exciting. It was difficult to got get the ticket defficulted. The for the concert as the tour obtained was a huge sucess and was attended by many people .
Good effort. I have just made the above changes to make it more understandable. I hope you don't mind.
Recently, I went to a concert on the Twins' tour. Many people were in the audience. It was very crowded but exciting. It was difficult to get a ticket because the concert tour was a huge success, and everyone wanted to attend.
This is a little different than Cristobal77's correction. I hope the variety helps you Doris. Take care :-)