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aybi_k

aybi_k (20)

aybi_k
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I've never worked a job before but now I want to work a job. I realy want to that beacuse I'm a student so I must work for school needs. I looked a job advert and I found a job. I made an application the company they wanted my cv .Yesterday I sent my cv but they didn't accept me beacuse the company looks for a personal to work on for a long time.

czajkamr

czajkamr (30)

czajkamr
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I've never had a job before, but now I want to get one. I realy (really) want to that beacuse (because) I'm a student, so I must work for school needs. I looked for a job advert and I found one a job. I submitted made an application to the company and they wanted my cv. Yesterday I sent my cv but they didn't accept me beacuse (because) the company is looks looking for a personal to work on for a long time with more experience.

 

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I've never had a job before, but now I want to get one.  I really want to because I'm a student, so I must work for school needs.  I looked for a job and found one.  I submitted an application to the company and they wanted my résumé (CV).  Yesterday I sent my résumé but they didn't accept me because the company is looking for a person with more experience.