Geography 2

Describe the most amazing scene you have ever seen.


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There are many years, I went to a study trip. After work, we went to the beach for relaxing. My friends entered in the water for swimming, I stayed in the shore because I was afraid to go deep in the sea. As I was at the water's edge, a big wave arrived and drew me towards the sea, I was terrify but I tried to resist. When the wave went back, I also went back home and I never return to the beach till the end of the trip.

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There are many years ago, I went to a study trip. After work, we went to the beach for relaxing. My friends entered in the water for swimming, I stayed in the shore because I was afraid to go deep in the sea. As I was at the water's edge, a big wave arrived and drew me towards the sea, I was terrify but I tried to resist. When the wave went back, I also went back home and I never returned to the beach till the end of the trip.

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There are many years, I went to a study trip. After work, we went to the beach for relaxing. My friends entered in the water for swimming, I stayed in the shore because I was afraid to go deep in the sea. As I was at the water's edge, a big wave arrived and drew me towards the sea, I was terrify but I tried to resist. When the wave went back, I also went back home and I never return to the beach till the end of the trip.

Many years ago, I went on a study trip.  After classes (work), we went to the beach to relax.  My friends went into the water to swim, but I stayed on the shore because I am afraid of deep water.  As I was sitting at the water's  edge, a big wave crashed there and  drew me  into the sea.  I was terrified and tried to resist.  As the wave rolled back, I was able to get up and go home.  I have never returned to the beach even after the trip ended.

Yours was good, but consider what I wrote.  I says much the same, but is easier to read!

mamipe

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Thanks!

mamipe

mamipe (33)

mamipe
I speak:
French
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
627

Thanks!