How I want to be

Describe all the positive qualities you have.


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Every man has own the positive qualities.
I have positive qualities too
I am open,optimistic,energetic,patient,sensible,responsible,persevering,sincere,discreet,pleasant,affectionate,sensitive,attentive,considerate,unassuming,altruistic,sympathetic,hospitable and a little dreamy.
And I think when all the people were patient,attentive,discreet,altruistic,sensitiv,sympathetic,responsible,open and sincere there wasn't be wars in the world. Theft, murder, famine, disease, and so on. there would be none of these. And all people were happy.

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Every man has his own positive qualities. I have positive qualities too I am; open, optimistic, energetic, patient, sensible, responsible, persevering, sincere, discreet, pleasant, affectionate, sensitive, attentive, considerate, unassuming, altruistic, sympathetic, hospitable and a little dreamy. And I think when all the people are (OR become) patient, attentive, discreet, altruistic, sensitiv, sympathetic, responsible, open and sincere there won't be wars in the world. Theft, murder, famine, disease, and so on, there would be none of these. And all people (OR everybody) would be happy.

Excellent my friend! Please remember to use spaces between words when you use a comma.

Well done!

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Thank you very much,dear friend.Thanks.

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Every man Everyone has their own the positive qualities. I have positive qualities too. I am open, optimistic, energetic, patient, sensible, responsible, persevering, sincere, discreet, pleasant, affectionate, sensitive, attentive, considerate, unassuming, altruistic, sympathetic, hospitable and a little dreamy. And I think, when if all the people were patient, attentive, discreet, altruistic,sensitive, sympathetic, responsible, open and sincere, there wasn't wouldn't be wars in the world, nor would there be theft, murder, famine, disease and so on. There would be none of these, and all people were would be happy.

Very well done.  Mən sizə dediyim hər şey ilə razıyam

 

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Thank you very much,dear friend.Thanks. I am very happy to see this sentences in my native languages. Thanks.Thank you for your attention,dear friend.

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You are very welcome.

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I agree with the comment of Randywilson.

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Thank you very much, dear friend. Thanks.

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Every man has his own the positive qualities. I have positive qualities, too I am open, optimistic, energetic, patient, sensible, responsible, persevering ,sincere, discreet, pleasant, affectionate, sensitive, attentive, considerate, unassuming, altruistic, sympathetic, hospitable and a little dreamy. And I think when if all the people were patient, attentive, discreet, altruistic, sensitiv, sympathetic, responsible, open and sincere there wasn't wouldn't be wars in the world or theft, murder, famine, disease, and so on. There would be none of these. And all people would be happy.

You needed to use future tense to describe how the world would be if all of this happened.  Also, when writing a list of words separated by commas, always add a space after the comma to make the list easier to read.  Well done.

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Thank you very much, dear friend.Thanks.