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World's Deadliest Scorpion

The Indian red scorpion is considered the most lethal of all scorpions. But despite its reputation, it only stings as a last resort. Shunning human contact, it prefers to feast on insects, such as roaches.
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The video is talking about the Indian red scorpion which is considered the most lethal of all scorpions. They are considered like as one of the first predators that walked on the Earth. There is most of fifty hundred species of scorpions around the world. The scorpion lives in every continent except in Antarctica. The Indian red scorpion is tiny like as a cigarette but in India the scorpion stings are considered a serious public healthy problem, particularly in children.
But despite its reputation, it only stings as a last resort. Shunning human contact, it prefers to feast on insects, such as roaches, spiders and mices.

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The video is talking about the Indian red scorpion which is considered the most lethal of all scorpions. it is considered like as one of the first predators that walked on the Earth. There are more of fifty hundred species of scorpions around the world. The scorpion lives in every continent except in Antarctica. The Indian red scorpion is tiny like as a cigarette but in India the scorpion stings are considered a serious public healthy problem, particularly in children.
But despite its reputation, it only stings as a last resort. Shunning human contact, it prefers to feast on insects, such as roaches, spiders and mices.

Congratulations man, it is really good,

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The video is talking about the Indian red scorpion, which is considered the most lethal of all scorpions. They are considered like as one of the first predators that walked on the Earth. There is almost of fifty hundred species of scorpions around the world. The scorpion lives in every continent except in Antarctica. The Indian red scorpion is tiny like as a cigarette, but in India the scorpion stings are considered a serious public healthy problem, particularly in children. But despite its reputation, it only stings as a last resort. Shunning human contact, it prefers to feast on insects, such as roaches, spiders and mices.

 

Wow that was reall good!

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The video is  talking(the video cannot speak) about the Indian red scorpion which is considered as the most lethal of  from  all scorpions. They are (considered) (repeat of the word "considered" does not sound good stylistic) like as thought to be one of the first predators that walked on the Earth. There is  are most of at least fifty (or "fifteen hundred"? Fifteen hundred makes 1500 species, fifty hundred - 5000, but English would rather say "fifteen hundred" than "fifty hundred") hundred  species of scorpions around the world. The scorpion lives in every continent except in Antarctica. The Indian red scorpion is tiny like as a cigarette but in India the scorpion stings are considered as a serious public healthy problem, particularly in for children. But despite its reputation, it only stings as a last resort. Shunning human contact, it prefers to feast on insects, such as roaches, spiders and mices.

 

Very good!

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Thank you ratobia