My family

Describe the family that appears in the photograph!


morry11

morry11

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There is happy family in this picture. The mother is hugging her daughter. And the father is keeping his son on his laps.

I am Nevin

I am Nevin (48)

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Hello,

We can rearrange this a little bit like this:

In this picture, I see a happy family.  The mother is hugging her daughter and the son is sitting on his father’s lap.

We use a coma after the first clause in the first sentence and modify the second sentence to include the statement about the mother and father.  Sentences should not begin with a conjunction word like "and" unless it is the word, however and after it we would place a coma as well.

Great job with your capitalization and period use...!

Nevin

morry11

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Thanks a lot)

 

I am Nevin

I am Nevin (48)

I am Nevin
I speak:
English
I learn:
Russian
Busuu berries :
23673

You are welcome...