Negative feelings

Write about a time when you had a bad feeling. What happened? How did you feel?


Dany Gomez Z

Dany Gomez Z (18)

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When Im sick I feel so blue because I would like to stand up and going outside cause I hate to being lonely or feeling abandoned and that infuriates me!.

giorgio 96

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When Im sick I feel so blue because I would like to stand up and going outside cause I hate to being lonely or feeling abandoned and that's makes me going crazy ! ... Very well you are so good :) .

Dany Gomez Z

Dany Gomez Z (18)

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thank you so much Giorgio!

Nick Fielding

Nick Fielding

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When I'm sick I feel so blue because I would like to stand up and go outside 'cause I hate to be lonely or feel abandoned and it infuriates me!

Infuriates is a great word to use, very well done.
Perhaps work on your verb endings, 'being, feeling, going', they're the correct verbs but with the wrong endings.
However, a good piece of work overall, well done!

Dany Gomez Z

Dany Gomez Z (18)

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Thank you so much for your feedback Nick! :)

Alex Lop

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Well done! You've explained yourself very well... Keep going! ;)))

Dany Gomez Z

Dany Gomez Z (18)

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Thank you Alex, I appreciate it :)

Alex Lop

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The pleasure is mine! ;)