Christmas

What do you like about Christmas?


Наталья

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Наталья
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I love Christmas.The atmosphere of this celebration creates something magic and amazing around us.Although we are not children but suddenly we can feel ourselves in fairy-tale.This is old kind story about Santa Claus with his Christmas presents.Today I put the presents under the Christmas tree for my son like a Father Christmas which was living in my imagination many years ago.

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zigstum
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I love Christmas.
The atmosphere of this celebration creates something magic and amazing around us.
(This season of celebration creates a magical and amazing atmosphere.)
Although we are not children but suddenly we can feel ourselves in fairy-tale.
(Even grown ups can be suddenly struck by a sense of wonder and awe; that 'fairy-tale feeling'.)
This is a legendary story about Santa Claus with his Christmas presents.
Today I put the presents under the Christmas tree for my son, like the Father Christmas that was living in my imagination many years ago.

Your English is excellent. I can only offer more natural ways of saying the things you wanted to say.

RDWARD1990

RDWARD1990

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I love Christmas.The atmosphere during this celebration creates something magical and simply amazing around us. Although we are not children anymore, we can still feel ourselves to be part of a wonderful fairy-tale especially when it snows.There is a story about Santa Claus and how he delivers his Christmas presents which to our kids when they are small. I put mine under the Christmas tree for my son just as Father Christmas does who lived in my imagination many years ago.

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