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Where do you live? Describe your city.


Ariel_Y

Ariel_Y (28)

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I live in a city called Asunción. Asunción is the capital of Paraguay, it is the biggest city and has the highest population. I live in a very nice neighbourhood full of trees and with beautiful squares and parks to be around, relaxing or playing some sports in the different courts and tracks. Most of the neighbourhoods are just fine although there are also very dangerous zones, especially at night, and dirty places with rubbish in the streets.

latinsunshine

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Good job Ariel!!!!  May I do you some little corrections??

I live in a city called Asunción. Asunción is Paraguay's capital, it is the biggest city and it has the highest population. I live in a very nice neighborhood full with trees and beautiful squares and parks all around, people relaxing or playing some sports in the different courts and tracks. Most of the neighborhoods are very nice, although there are also very dangerous zones, especially at night and dirty places with trash in the streets.

jonblack

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The meaning of this is well understood, however the sentences need to be shorter.  I would recommend breaking both the second and third sentences into two. The sentences can have two parts, but there needs to be better transitions into sentence's second clause.  There are too many ands and commas. 

I live in a city called Asunción. Asunción is the capital of Paraguay, andit is the biggest city with and has the highest population. I live in a very nice neighbourhood full of trees, and with beautiful squares and parks which are good for to be around, relaxing, or playing some sports inon the different courts and tracks. Most of the neighbourhoods are just fine, although there are also some very dangerous zones, especially at night, and with dirty places and rubbish in the streets.

Claudia_Brito

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I live in a city called Asunción. Asunción is the capital of Paraguay, it and is the biggest city with and has the highest population. I live in a very nice neighbourhood full of trees, and with beautiful squares and parks to be aroundwhich are good for relaxing or playing some sports (you could name a few like soccer, volleyball, etc) in on the different courts and tracks. Most of the neighbourhoods are just finealthough there are also some very dangerous zones, especially at night, and with dirty places with and rubbish in the streets.

Ariel_Y

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haha ¡Gracias!  =D   Yo hice este ejercicio hace muchisimo tiempo, no sé como lo encontraste, y ni siquiera estás en mi grupo de amigos  =D  heheh 

Claudia_Brito

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 De nada, pues la verdad yo lo vi en la parte donde dice "Posts to be corrected" de todos modos espero que te hayga ayudado :), tu nivel de ingles es bueno. 

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excellent

Kristik-Kristinka

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I live in a city called Asunción. Asunción is the capital of Paraguay, it and is the biggest city with and has the highest population. I live in a very nice neighbourhood full of trees, and with beautiful squares and parks to be aroundwhich are good for relaxing or playing some sports (you could name a few like soccer, volleyball, etc) in on the different courts and tracks. Most of the neighbourhoods are just finealthough there are also some very dangerous zones, especially at night, and with dirty places with and rubbish in the streets.

Excellent  information!!! =)))

Ariel_Y

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Thank you so much for your help, actually this post is so old I don't know how you could see it haha  =D