The report is about a new nation after the separation of the Sudan country. It's the result of many conflicts between the North and South which caused the dead deaths of two million pepole people.  South Sundan is a very dry place so people are facing to famine and illnesses, it's one of the poorest countries in the world althoughthe subsoil is very rich. They are preparing the celebration of the event and cleaning Juba the new capital, a new flag is born. I wish this event will stops stopped conflicts they knowed know and will solve solved famine, I'm not sure about that... Thanks :)

The report is about the creation of a new nation, South Sudan, after the separation of the Sudanese country.  It's the result of many decades of conflict(s) between North and South which has caused the death of two million pepole people, and skirmishes continue along the border leaving many homeless and without food, although the remainder of the country is now mostly peaceful.  South Su(n)dan is a very dry place so people are facing to famine and illnesses, it's one of the poorest countries in the world, although the subsoil is very rich, and they are oil rich. They are preparing for the celebration of the event and cleaning Juba the new capital, a new flag is born.  I wish hope this event will stop the conflicts they knowed about  and will solve famine.  I'm not sure about that, and the new President is aware that the people are looking not just to the forming of a new country but what will happen after that... Thanks :)

Once again you have understood the article very well. This would have been much harder for you because of the presiden't heavy African accent. The two sentences in red I would NOT expect you to have put in, but to make the story whole I have put them in for you.  THEY ARE NOT MISTAKES.

Well done my friend. 5* for achievement and effort from me.

Well done Cailliere! You wrote a good summary of this video. Rocky has made some good suggestions and corrected your mistakes. Your progress is impressive!

Maggie

The report is about the creation of a new nation, South Sudan, after the segregation of the country of Sudan. It's the result of many conflicts over a long period between northern and southern Sudan which has caused the deaths of about two million people.

South Sudan is a very dry place so people are facing * famine and illness.  It's one of the poorest countries in the world although it's very rich in oil resources.

The people of South Sudan are preparing to celebrate the creation of their nation and are cleaning-up Juba, the new capital.  A new flag too is born.

I hope this change will stop the conflict southern Sudan has known and will resolve the famine issues, but I'm not sure about that... Thanks :)

Very good 

A few refinements.

This is great Caiilière! Rocky and Chilla59 have made some good corrections/suggestions. Keep up the great work!

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